Thursday, 31 January 2013
We All Fall Down - Production
This was our first draft of our film opening, although we liked this, we realised that it looked a lot like a trailer as did a lot of people who we showed this opening too.
We then decided to add a clip on the end of Josie in her everyday life to make it look more like a film opening We also changed the titles from the first time as it going straight onto a black screen it made it look more like a trailer so we decided to elongate the clip of Josie walking into the chapel and have the title come over that. We also had to edit the end of the clip because it cut off before we wanted it too.
After our second draft we decided that when we added both pieces of footage the editing between them looked awkward and didn't flow nicely together so we then decided to take out the second part. After changing the titles so that they came up on the screen over the footage we decided that we needed to have the rest of 'ring a ring a roses' before 'We All Fall Down' comes up for the title to make sense, so we extended the voice clip which then enabled the title to make sense in the context we put it in.
After showing this to our target audience at our screening, one of the boys said that it would make sense for us to have a date and time in the graveyard and then have an earlier date and time when she wakes up so people would realise that it wasn't happening simultaneously and that infact what happened at the beginning would come clear later, which may lead to people wanted to watch the whole film.
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